The youth in many countries are unemployed and unskilled, while at the same time, the military services are in need of people. Compulsory military service is beneficial and necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that compulsory military service is beneficial and necessary

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both physically and mentally. Now individuals are beginning to realize that the youngsters in many countries are unemployed and unskilled,

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at the same time, the military services are in need of people. Personally, I tend to think that the youth must not serve their home

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and protect it since they

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can be essential reasons behind it. On the one hand, it is well known that there are

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195 countries

in the whole world and

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there are a plethora of conflicts and misunderstandings among countries. What I mean here is that it is critical to save the

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in a better way for the new generations. One of the major reasons behind

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to live peacefully,

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, if the

country

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is in danger citizens must protect it from enemies. A good case in point is to serve the

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and

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employed and skilled not only

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physical

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option but

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mentally strong by aiming

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human-being

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attitudes

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as responsibility and generosity

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the serving period of time.

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, it can

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be argued that the government must pay attention

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the person’s situation.

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some people can have serious reasons to not go to compulsory military service.

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, the youth’s financial issues, family problems, and the citizen’s health conditions to name but a few. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned up, the health problems

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financial issues play vital

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in deciding to attend

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the military

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.

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, the government must

to

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take

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into account.

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, the

citizens

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health and well-being are necessary

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with the military service.