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Task 1: The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast-food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Task 1: The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast-food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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This
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 chart illustrates the frequency of eating from fast-food outlets by US citizens between 2003 and 2013 which is divided into six categories from going every day to not going at all.
Overall
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, once a
week
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 and one to two times a month were the predominant categories with the highest percentage of the masses going there once a
week
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 in 2006
while
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 monthly or bimonthly visits became more popular in 2013. The extremes of daily or never going to
such
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 outlets were least common. In 2003, almost one-third of Americans went to fast-food chains on a weekly basis and similar figures were noted for monthly or twice-monthly visitors.At that time, the lowest proportion of people were those who ate daily at less than 5 per
cent
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.There was an upward trend for daily goers and those having several visits per
week
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 in 2006 by three per
cent
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.
On the other hand
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, monthly figures declined by 5 per
cent
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.
On the contrary
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, the eating habits changed in 2013 with a drop in weekly or several times per
week
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 dine-outs by 4 per
cent
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whereas
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, once or twice monthly fast-food eating rose by 7 per
cent
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.
However
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, there was not much change in the eating plan of those going daily, or non-users of junk food which remained low at less than 5 per
cent
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.Occasional eating in a year
also
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 remained static at 15 per
cent
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 over ten years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words week, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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