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The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the whole world and in different parts of the world.

The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the whole world and in different parts of the world.
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The provided bar chart demonstrates data about the proportion of
people
 living in City regions in all of the world and in various sections of the world. A glance at the graph reveals that by 2025 living in
cities
 in North
America
 will have been as popular as living in
Europe
and
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Latin
America
 and
Caribbean
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the Caribbean
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.
However
,in 1950 the
population
 did not prefer to live in Urban areas in
Africa
 and
Asia
. By 2050,A very large proportion(90 per cent)of
people
 will have chosen to live in the
down town
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downtown
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 of North
America
,just ahead of
population
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the population
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 who will have tended to live in
cities
 in
Latin
America
/
Caribbean
 and
Europe
 at 89% and 84%,respectively.
Moreover
,in 2007 roughly
three quarters
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three-quarters
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 of
people
prefered
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preferred
 to live in development areas in North
America
,
Latin
America
/
Caribbean
 and
Europe
.Whilst,just under
two thirds
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two-thirds
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 of
population
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the population
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 were into
live
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life
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 in
cities
 in North
America
,making it slightly more lovely than
Latin
America
/
Caribbean
 and
Europe
.
In contrast
,living in the
cities
 in
Asia
 will be as prominent as
Africa
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in Africa
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 at 66% and 62%,respectively.
While
,in 1950 a small minority of
people
 liked to live in city areas in
Asia
 and
Africa
.(Which comprised the least number of
population
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the population
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).
Following
this
,living in capital
cities
 in
Asia
(41%)was slightly more prominent than
Africa
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in Africa
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(37%).
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • percentage
  • population
  • regions
  • trends
  • global
  • increase/decrease
  • patterns
  • compare/contrast
  • noteworthy
  • industrialization
  • economic factors
  • migration
  • government policies
  • bar chart illustrates
  • overall trend
  • noticeable
  • particularly
  • summarize
  • highlight
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