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The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the whole world and in different parts of the world.

The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the whole world and in different parts of the world.
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The provided bar chart demonstrates data about the proportion of
people
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 living in City regions in all of the world and in various sections of the world. A glance at the graph reveals that by 2025 living in
cities
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 in North
America
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 will have been as popular as living in
Europe
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and
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Latin
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America
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 and
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Caribbean
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the Caribbean
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.
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,in 1950 the
population
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 did not prefer to live in Urban areas in
Africa
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 and
Asia
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. By 2050,A very large proportion(90 per cent)of
people
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 will have chosen to live in the
down town
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downtown
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 of North
America
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,just ahead of
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population
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the population
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 who will have tended to live in
cities
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 in
Latin
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America
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/
Caribbean
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 and
Europe
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 at 89% and 84%,respectively.
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,in 2007 roughly
three quarters
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three-quarters
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 of
people
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prefered
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preferred
 to live in development areas in North
America
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,
Latin
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America
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/
Caribbean
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 and
Europe
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.Whilst,just under
two thirds
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two-thirds
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 of
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population
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the population
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 were into
live
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life
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 in
cities
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 in North
America
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,making it slightly more lovely than
Latin
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America
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/
Caribbean
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 and
Europe
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.
In contrast
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,living in the
cities
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 in
Asia
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 will be as prominent as
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Africa
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in Africa
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 at 66% and 62%,respectively.
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,in 1950 a small minority of
people
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 liked to live in city areas in
Asia
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 and
Africa
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.(Which comprised the least number of
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population
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the population
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).
Following
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this
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,living in capital
cities
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 in
Asia
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(41%)was slightly more prominent than
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Africa
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in Africa
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(37%).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, cities, america, europe, latin, caribbean, population, africa, asia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • percentage
  • population
  • regions
  • trends
  • global
  • increase/decrease
  • patterns
  • compare/contrast
  • noteworthy
  • industrialization
  • economic factors
  • migration
  • government policies
  • bar chart illustrates
  • overall trend
  • noticeable
  • particularly
  • summarize
  • highlight
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