The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the average temperature and the value of swimming suits sold in the first six months of 2012 in New York.
Overall
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, There is a steady increase in the temperature of the city , which in turn is consistent with the escalation in the number of swimming costumes sold from February to April. It is evident that people bought bathing suits in preparation for summer because the temperature continued to rise after April but sales dropped. The average heat escalated from 30 degrees in February to over 60 degrees in June.
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, the increase is steep and gradual.
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, there is a clear increment in the value of swimming clothes sold from February ($100 hundred thousand) to April (over $250 hundred thousand).
Although
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climate continued to increase in May and June, sales of swimwear dropped after April reaching less than $25 hundred thousand in June, indicating people do their shopping early in preparation for summer.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average monthly temperatures
  • bathing suit sales
  • correlation
  • monthly breakdown
  • significant changes
  • warmest months
  • speculate
  • trends
  • increase in temperature
  • contrasting
  • predictive speculation
  • general trends
  • specific months
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