The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016

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of patients that visited the hospital for four different clinics per week

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2010 and 2016. The amount measured in people. In general, birth control was the main reason why the patients visited hospitals with the highest number,

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diabetes was the lowest offered service. All of the figures increased except birth control, which remained in the same range of patients. Beginning with

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birth control reason, in 2010, it started at nearly 250

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to approximately 270 residents. After that, it went from 270 humanities in 2012 to about 170 individuals in 2014. They climbed up slowly to 240 families in the

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year. Moving eye service in hospitals, which was the second highest, was at 130 in 2010 and reached a peak at 350 people in 2016. Turning into the least services, diabetes began at nearly 50 individuals per week and increased slowly to

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90 persons in 2014,

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it had a slight increase to about 170 natives in 2016. Dental had a quite low start, which was exactly 100 natives and had a fluctuation to nearly 140 humans in 2016.