The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016.

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the data that contained the amount of weekly

patients

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patient

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encouragement for clinics in a hospital between 2010 and 2016.

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eye

patients

got

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an

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increased and

reach

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the highest number in 2016, whilst in 2010

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keep

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the lowest number and

got

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climb

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up after that. Birth control and dental

also

soared

too

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. Beginning with the

people

got

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with

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, it

start

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at around 125

people

in 2010 and

then

rised

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significantly to 350

person

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in 2016. Moving onto

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, those

people

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at nearly 60

people

in 2010, which was the lowest

on

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in four clinics

then

it got fluctuation until 2014 and

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to

climbed

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up steadily to 175

patients

in 2016. Turning to the remaining statistic, it can be observed that dental got a deep from 100 to approximately 115

patients

between 2010 and 2014, before it increased slightly to around 145

patients

in 2016. Moving onto birth control, which got the highest started in 2010 at nearly 350 sick

people

,

it’s

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also

went up slowly to 2012 until it dropped considerably to around 170

people

and

come

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back

at

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nearly 250

patients

in 2016.