The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Given are two graphs concerning the
number
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of
phone
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subscribers among four countries (namely, Eritrea, India, the United Kingdom and Uruguay) in a ten-year period. The first provides data on the subscriptions to mobile phones,
while
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the second indicates the population that
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to fixed telephones.
Overall
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, it is evident that these nations saw considerable differences in the
number
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of people who chose these
phone
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services. The
number
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of users of cell phones among these four countries increased throughout the decade
while
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a declining trend had been shown for landlines. It is apparent from the information supplied that Britain had the highest
number
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of mobile
phone
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users before 2009. From every British owning one
phone
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in 2005, the figure of customers climbed steadily to one-fourth
citizens
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of citizens
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having two phones in 2015. Second in terms of cell
phone
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use was Uruguay.
This
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country saw a threefold increase during the period in question, from less than 50 people who had a
phone
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in 2005 to over 150 in 2015. A similar increase took place in India. The nation with the fewest mobile
phone
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users, meanwhile, was Eritrea. It is
also
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interesting to note that the usage of fixed telephone was far more common in the UK than in other countries listed. In fact, the prevalence of
landline
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landlines
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in Britain was doubled that of Uruguay. India and Eritrea, meanwhile, had the fewest total of landline subscribers with
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less than 5 people.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, phone with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • subscriptions
  • mobile phone
  • fixed phone lines
  • trends
  • increases
  • decreases
  • comparisons
  • features
  • noticeable
  • patterns
  • socio-economic factors
  • technological advancements
  • anomalies
  • highest
  • lowest
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