The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
The bar charts compare the graduate and postgraduate
students
who were not employed with full-time work
in terms of what they did after finishing college in the UK in 2008.
Overall
, the most of students
continued their studies and the lowest indicator belonged to the students
who did voluntary work
.
Among the graduate students
, the biggest indicator belonged to the students
who continued their studies, with 29 665
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29,665
students
. The figure for students
who were not employed was relatively the same as those for students
who worked part-time, with 16 235 students
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students
for part-time work
. Moreover
, the least
number of Correct word choice
lowest
students
went to voluntary work
, at 3 500 students
.
Regarding postgraduate students
, most students
continued their studies, at almost 2725 students
. The indicator of part-time worked students
was quite lower than it, at 2535 students
. Moreover
, approximately 1625 students
were not employed. This
figure was nearly 5 times as high as those for voluntarily worked students
. There were 345 students
who went to the voluntary work
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