The graph shows the rates of participation in three different activities in a UK sports club between 1995 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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A glance at the graphs
provide
reveals the relative rate of participation in various Verb problem
apply
sports
activities, including swimming, team sports
and gym activities, in a British sports
club
in a twenty-year period.
Overall
, club
members' preferences varied throughout the period. It is interesting to note that there were
an increased number of Correct subject-verb agreement
was
club
members who participated in working out while
a downward trend had been shown in swimming and team sports
.
It is apparent from the information supplied that the popularity of swimming, which was the most popular sport in 1995, declined substantially over the decade. One in every two people swam in this
sport club
in 1995 while
a mere 15 per cent
of members swam between 2010 and 2015. Gym activities, meanwhile, had an increasing trend from approximately 5 per cent
in 1995 to somewhere in the vicinity of 28 per cent
in 2010, followed by a slightly declination to 25 per cent
in 2015. Team sports
,Correct word choice
apply
whereas
, had moderate
level of participation and fluctuated between 32 per Add an article
a moderate
cent
, the lowest in 1995 to 40 per cent
in 2010.Submitted by puimei822 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, club, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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