The graph shows the rates of participation in three different activities in a UK sports club between 1995 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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A glance at the graphs

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reveals the relative rate of participation in various

sports

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activities, including swimming, team

sports

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and gym activities, in a British

sports

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club

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in a twenty-year period.

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club

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members' preferences varied throughout the period. It is interesting to note that there

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an increased number of

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members who participated in working out

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a downward trend had been shown in swimming and team

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. It is apparent from the information supplied that the popularity of swimming, which was the most popular sport in 1995, declined substantially over the decade. One in every two people swam in

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sport

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in 1995

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a mere 15 per

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of members swam between 2010 and 2015. Gym activities, meanwhile, had an increasing trend from approximately 5 per

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in 1995 to somewhere in the vicinity of 28 per

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in 2010, followed by a slightly declination to 25 per

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in 2015. Team

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whereas

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level of participation and fluctuated between 32 per

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, the lowest in 1995 to 40 per

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in 2010.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, club, cent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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