The chart below show percentage of water used in different sectors in Sydney, Australia in 1977 and 2007.
The pie charts compare portions of
water
used in various sections in Sydney and Australia in 1997 and 2007.
Overall
, it is clear that
Sydneysiders and Australian people spent the largest proportion of the
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water
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food
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the food
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building
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industry
in 1997 and 2007.
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industry
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industry
, in 1997 people spent 13% of water
and 2007
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