Task1: The graph below shows a number of tourists visiting a particular carribean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Task1: The graph below shows a number of tourists visiting a particular carribean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates data regarding the tourists
number
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have been to a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. Generally speaking, the
overall
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trend of visitors
number
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has dramatically increased in the given interval, albeit with specific trends for visitors who chose to stay on cruise ships or go to the island. First off, the
number
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of people who stay on cruise ships increased from 0.25m to 0.5m from 2010 to 2011,
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dropped back to 0.5m in the year of 2012. After 2012, the whole
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of people who chose to stay on cruise ships faced a constant and steep increase from 2012 to 2017, which was 0.25m to 2m. The
number
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of tourists who chose to stay on the island had no change from 2010 to 2011,
then
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surged from 0.75m to 1.5m from 2011 to 2013,
then
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kept the same
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from 2013 to 2015, it decreased from 1.5m to 1.25m in 2015, after that, it faced only a moderate growth which goes back to 1.5m. The
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number
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of tourists surged from 1m to 2.75m between 2010 and 2016,
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it kept the same
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in the year of 2015,
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skyrocketing from 2.75m to 3.5m.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "surged" was used 2 times.
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