The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram explains the way in which
bricks
are made for the building industry. Overall
, there are seven stages in the process
, beginning with the digging up of clay
and culminating in delivery.
To begin
, the clay
used to make the bricks
is dug up from the ground by a large digger. This
clay
is then
placed onto a metal grid, which is used to break up the clay
into smaller pieces. A roller assists in this
process
.
Following
this
, sand and water are added to the clay
, and this
mixture is turned into bricks
by either placing it into a mould or using a wire cutter. Next,
these bricks
are placed in an oven to dry for 24 – 48 hours.
In the subsequent stage, the bricks
go through a heating and cooling process
. They are heated in a kiln at a moderate and then
a high temperature (ranging from 200c to 1300c), followed by a cooling process
in a chamber for 2 – 3 days. Finally
, the bricks
are packed and delivered to their destinations.Submitted by shahab.a on
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