The table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries. (Figures are based on the minimum daily requirement per peron of 11.5 litres.)

The table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries. (Figures are based on the minimum daily requirement per peron of 11.5 litres.)
The table compares how much people have to pay for their minimum daily
water
needs in five countries. It
also
shows what percentage of the average daily
wage
each location represents. First of all, we can see that Tanzania and Uganda have the highest daily
cost
of
water
,
while
the United Kingdom and the United States have the lowest.
This
means,
for example
, that Tanzanians pay 6.4 cents,
while
Americans pay only 0.85 cents for the same amount of
water
. These differences are even greater when we consider the percentage of the average daily
wage
this
cost
represents. In both Tanzania and Uganda, the
cost
is significant, accounting for 5.7% and 3.2%, respectively.
However
, in the UK and US, the
cost
is only a fraction of the daily
wage
at 0.013% and 0.006%. And
although
the daily
cost
of
water
in Pakistan is similar to that of the UK, it represents up to 1.1% of the daily
wage
. In general, the table shows that there are significant differences between the
cost
of
water
in developing countries and the industrialized West.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • daily cost
  • per person
  • minimum daily requirement
  • litres
  • comparison
  • assessment
  • analysis
  • evaluation
  • impact
  • citizens
  • relationship
  • availability
  • resources
  • measures
  • manage
  • implications
  • health
  • hygiene
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