the chart below shows the percentage of river water in UK rivers that is classified as aving good chemical quality between 1990 and 2002

the chart below shows the percentage of river water in UK rivers that is classified as aving good chemical quality between 1990 and 2002
The given line graph illustrates the
proportion
of water in rivers of four distinctive rivers located in the United Kingdom
according to
the
quality
of
chemicals
from 1990 to 2000. Generally speaking, it can be clearly seen that the
proportion
of chemical
quality
in
river
water in
Wales
was the highest
figure
in the beginning.
Followed
Wrong verb form
Following
show examples
, the percentage of chemical
quality
in Scotland's
river
was the lowest
point
.
However
, the
figure
for the
quality
of
chemicals
in Scotland's
river
finished at the highest percentage.
To begin
, the
proportion
of chemical
quality
in
river
water at both
Wales
's
river
and Northern Ireland's
river
was unchanged by 95% and 85% respectively over an 8-year span. After that, the
figure
for chemical
quality
in Northern Ireland's
river
increased to overtake the
point
of the
quality
of
chemicals
in
Wales
's
river
to 85% after the following year, before remaining constant
at the end
of time,
while
the
figure
for the chemical's
quality
from
Wales
's
river
fell considerably to 80% from 1997 to 2002. Moving on to the percentage of
chemical's
Change noun form
chemical
show examples
quality
in England's
river
Fix the agreement mistake
rivers
show examples
, the
figure
increased to reach a peak at approximately 70% from 1990 to 1996. the
proportion
of
quality
of
chemicals
in England's
river
Fix the agreement mistake
rivers
show examples
then
decreased sharply to 30%
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
two
year
Change to a plural noun
years
show examples
later, before going up to the same
point
at the time's start in 2002. Especially, the
proportion
of the
quality
of
chemical
Fix the agreement mistake
chemicals
show examples
in Scotland's
river
increased and
over take
Correct your spelling
overtake
show examples
the
point
of England's
river
from 30% to nearly 60% in 2000, after remaining
the
Change preposition
at the
show examples
same
point
at 30% from 1992 to 1996. And
then
,
this
figure
decreased to 40% in 2002.
Submitted by [email protected] on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, quality, chemicals, river, wales, figure, point with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: