the chart below shows the percentage of river water in UK rivers that is classified as aving good chemical quality between 1990 and 2002

the chart below shows the percentage of river water in UK rivers that is classified as aving good chemical quality between 1990 and 2002
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The given line graph illustrates the
proportion
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of water in rivers of four distinctive rivers located in the United Kingdom
according to
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the
quality
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of
chemicals
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from 1990 to 2000. Generally speaking, it can be clearly seen that the
proportion
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of chemical
quality
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in
river
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water in
Wales
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was the highest
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in the beginning.
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, the percentage of chemical
quality
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in Scotland's
river
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was the lowest
point
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.
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, the
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for the
quality
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of
chemicals
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in Scotland's
river
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finished at the highest percentage.
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, the
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of chemical
quality
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in
river
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water at both
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's
river
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and Northern Ireland's
river
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was unchanged by 95% and 85% respectively over an 8-year span. After that, the
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for chemical
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in Northern Ireland's
river
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increased to overtake the
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of the
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of
chemicals
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in
Wales
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's
river
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to 85% after the following year, before remaining constant
at the end
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of time,
while
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the
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for the chemical's
quality
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from
Wales
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's
river
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fell considerably to 80% from 1997 to 2002. Moving on to the percentage of
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quality
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in England's
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river
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rivers
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, the
figure
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increased to reach a peak at approximately 70% from 1990 to 1996. the
proportion
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of
quality
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of
chemicals
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in England's
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river
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rivers
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then
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decreased sharply to 30%
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two
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later, before going up to the same
point
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at the time's start in 2002. Especially, the
proportion
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of the
quality
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of
chemical
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chemicals
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in Scotland's
river
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increased and
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the
point
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of England's
river
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from 30% to nearly 60% in 2000, after remaining
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at the
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same
point
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at 30% from 1992 to 1996. And
then
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,
this
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figure
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decreased to 40% in 2002.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, quality, chemicals, river, wales, figure, point with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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