the graphs below show the percentage of men and wommen aged 60-64bwho were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000.
The given bar charts compare four different countries namely
Belgium
, the USA
, Japan
, and Australia
in terms of the proportion of employees falling into the 60-64 age group in 1970 and 2000.
Overall
, what is notable from the chart is that consistent increases were observed in the percentage of males aged 60-64 in employment across all countries. Meanwhile, with women in this
age range, the upward trajectory was only seen in Japan
and Belgium
. Of all the countries, Japan
recorded the largest shares of both male and female workforce entering their early 60s during the entire period.
In 1970, 74% of men in Japan
still worked, followed by the USA
and Australia
, with respective figures standing at around 55% and 47%. In Belgium
accounted for just under 20%. Although
Japan
only recorded a gentle rise to 86%. Similar changes, we
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Belgium
, which rose fourfold to nearly 80%. In
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Australia
and the USA
, also
witnessed a marked uptick to 76% and 74%.
Japan
had the highest employment rate with 40% in 1970, after which this
figure increased to 43% over the next 30 years. The USA
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from 39% to 36% over the same period. Wrong verb form
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Australia
rose by 2% and ended the period at around 16%, double the figure for Belgium
, levelling off at around 8% between 1970 and 2000.Submitted by [email protected] on
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