The charts give information about the proportions of boys and girls of a school who achieved high grades (A or B+) in respective courses. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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B plus in six subjects in 1996 and 2000.
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Overall
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heighest
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only 17% in 2000. Meanwhile, that figure for girls increased slightly, from 10% to 11%. Change preposition
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Additionally
, male and female students showed oppsite
tendency in arts, maths and humanities. The proportion of male students who achieved over B+ increased by around 10% to 21%. But there were fewer ladies' scores over B plus (30% in 1996 and 25% in 2000).
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females
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