The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment
The given process diagram illustrates the end-to-end process of consumer goods production, including
feedback
information from several steps of the process to improve the product
quality.
Firstly
, it begins with the procurement of raw materials and manufactured components that will be put in storage until the production planning is complete. In parallel, the planning needs research to finalize the product
design before it can start. Following
this
, the flow continues step by step technically from assembly, inspection, testing, packaging, and despatch, until it is ready for sale to customers.
To make sure there is continuous improvement within the business, feedback
is provided by the particular team
. The production planning team
gives feedback
to the storage team
about the material specifications while
the sales team
also
tells the finished product
satisfaction level to them. In addition
, the market research team
provides feedback
to the sales, advertising, packaging, and design team
. The testing team
also
has the right to complain about the product
design.Submitted by vito.naufal on
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