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The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment

The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment
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The given process diagram illustrates the end-to-end process of consumer goods production, including
feedback
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 information from several steps of the process to improve the
product
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 quality.
Firstly
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, it begins with the procurement of raw materials and manufactured components that will be put in storage until the production planning is complete. In parallel, the planning needs research to finalize the
product
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 design before it can start.
Following
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this
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, the flow continues step by step technically from assembly, inspection, testing, packaging, and despatch, until it is ready for sale to customers. To make sure there is continuous improvement within the business,
feedback
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 is provided by the particular
team
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. The production planning
team
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 gives
feedback
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 to the storage
team
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 about the material specifications
while
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 the sales
team
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also
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 tells the finished
product
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 satisfaction level to them.
In addition
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, the market research
team
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 provides
feedback
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 to the sales, advertising, packaging, and design
team
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. The testing
team
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also
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 has the right to complain about the
product
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 design.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words feedback, product, team with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer goods manufacturing
  • stages
  • diagram
  • information feedback
  • adjustment
  • raw material extraction
  • processing
  • component manufacturing
  • assembly
  • packaging
  • overview
  • feedback loop
  • summarize
  • main points
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