The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

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sex and

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groups in Australia in 2010.

First,

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in Australia, approximately four in ten people did regular

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activities

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during their lives as of

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15 and over. In the youngest group, people from 15 to 24 years old, females

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accounted for 47.7% only,

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males

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presented

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of 52.8%. In stark contrast, growing up women became more active and improved

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of regular physical

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from

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25 and more,

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around

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-54 years old category with 53.3%,

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decreased gradually until the

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of 35 to 44 and

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slightly recovered. People above 65

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roughly the same parameters, 46.7 and 47.1 for

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and females respectively.

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, the biggest disproportion was observed in the

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group of 35 to 44, when

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the share

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of

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who were doing regular physical

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achieved the bottom of 39.5%,

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females accounted for 52.5, which is 12% more, compared to

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.

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, in terms of doing regular

sport

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activities

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adult women were more active than men,

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among the youth men were led.