The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
analytic report provides information pertaining to the police's allocation in the UK from 2017 to 2018. The table shows the origin of the money, shown in millions of pounds while
the pie charts illustrate how it was used, measured in percentage (%).
In concise terms, it can be seen that the majority of funds came from the national government in both years
.It can also
be observed that spending was highest on buildings and transport over the timestamp.
Looking at the figures of the sources of the police's allowance in further
detail, it is evident that the national.
government's budget increased slightly from £175.5m to £177.8m in the period of 2 years
. Similarly
, over the timeframe, the fund of local taxes and other sources experienced an upward trend from roughly £91.2m and £38m to exactly £102m and £3m, respectively.
Turning to the proportion of purposes of money spending, there was a gradual increase in the technology's percentage from 8% to 14%. Eventually, the buildings and transport rates experienced an upward trend between 75% and 69% during the period of 2 years
. Additionally
, Salaries' proportion still remained at 17% after 2 years
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