The line graph illustrates the average monthly change in price of 3 metals in 2014

The line graph illustrates the average monthly change in price of 3 metals in 2014
Contained in the line graph is data pertaining to the alteration in
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price of 3 different types of metal throughout the year 2014
Overall
, the conversion in the cost of
nickel
and
copper
witnessed a downward trajectory over the surveyed period,
while
the opposite was true for that of zinc. Notably, the most significant volatility can be seen in the figure for
nickel
. Looking at the first half of the year, it is apparent that the change
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price
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of
nickel
fell significantly from exactly 6% to 1% during the first three months before hitting a trough at precisely -3% in June,
while
there was a gradual decline of
approxiamtely
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approximately
1,5% in that of
copper
.
Whereas
, the figure for zinc started at exactly 1% in January. It
then
increased rapidly to exactly 3% in February prior to plummeting to -3% in June. Turning to the second half of the year, despite some fluctuations, both figures for
nickel
and zinc experienced a swift rise to exactly 2% and 1% between June and December,
repectively
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respectively
. Meanwhile, the conversion in price of
copper
grew moderately to precisely 1% in July.
Following
this
,
copper
remained unchanged at 1% in the next 3 months before decreasing to approximately 0,5% in December.
Subsequently
, the figure rebounded to roughly 1,5%
at the end
of the period.
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