The bar graph indicates tje average amount of water used by different household appliances each day in the US. The table shows how many gallons of water were consumed oer oersin in the US over a 25-year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting themain features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram provided data on the information about daily
water
consumed by
electric appliances by families per day
in the US. Also
, table
Correct article usage
the table
illastrated
how much Correct your spelling
illustrated
illustrates
water
an individual uses per day
from 1985 to 2010. The diagram reveals a clear relationship between electric materials and gallons
per day
.
The largest part of consumed water
is the toilet around 30 gallons
per day
. It can seen that from this
diagram Shower, Faucet, and Washing Machine have similar values about
25 Change preposition
of about
gallons
and Correct article usage
the Diswasher
Diswasher
, Bath and Correct your spelling
dishwasher
Other
have the Fix the agreement mistake
Others
leastest
Correct your spelling
least
lastest
number
under 5 Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
gallons
.
It is clear that
from this
table, Water
use has continued to increase with advancing age from 98 gallons
in 1985 to 110gallons
in 2010.Correct your spelling
110 gallons
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