The two bar charts show the proportion of 14-16 year-old students studying a modern foreign language in an English Speaking country and the top three popular foreign languages.
The two charts illustrate the proportion of recruitment aged 14-16 learning a foreign language and the first three most popular languages on the list
such
as French, German, and Spanish from 1984 to 2007
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Overall
, the ratio of male to female Linking Words
admission
decreased in the first graph. Fix the agreement mistake
admissions
While
rates of learning French and German dropped, rates of learning Spanish increased in another graph.
Starting from the foreign language chart, it can be seen that male students' spending went down from 49% to 40% in the period 1984-2007. Linking Words
In addition
, the proportion of female children decreased slightly from 30% to 25% during the same period.
Turning to another chart, we can see that the number of students learning French decreased from 50% to 25%, Linking Words
In contrast
, the number of enlistment learning Spanish increased from about 2% in 1984 to 10% in 2007. Linking Words
Besides
, There was a decrease in the rate of learning German from 20% to about 12% in 2007.Linking Words
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