The chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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bar chart illustrates the changes in the proportion of
car
ownership
in
households
in a European region from 1971 to 2001.
Overall
, it could be observed that
car
ownership
showed an upward trend through 30 years, with the
percentage
of
families
who have
one
or two
cars
increased
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increasing
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significantly,
while
the
proportions
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proportion
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of homes
who
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that
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do not have any
car
declined steadily. When it came to 2001,
families
with
one
car
had the highest
percentage
. As can be seen in 1971,
households
without
cars
ranked in the first position with 48%, which was followed by
families
owned
Correct pronoun usage
who owned
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one
car
, at 36%, and the lowest
one
was homes
owned
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that owned
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two
cars
with
the
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a
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percentage
at
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of
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18%. Moving to 1981, it could be seen that
households
without
cars
still had the highest
percentage
but it had decreased to 41%, which was the same trend with
families
who had
one
car
, its proportion went down slightly to 35% in 1981.
However
, homes who owned two
cars
exhibited an upward trend which was risen dramatically from 18% in 1971 to 28% in 1981. Regarding
at
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the remaining figures with the proportions of
car
ownership
in 1991 and 2001, the
percentage
of
household
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households
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without
cars
ending
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ended
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at roughly 30% in both 1991 and 2001,
while
single
car
households
had
its
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percentage
increased significantly from 35% in 1981 to 48% in1991, but it had been declined after 10 years to 42% in 2001.
Finally
, dual
car
ownership
experienced a decline and rose in proportion over 20 years, from 28% in 1981 to 21% in 1991,
then
rising from 21% to 30% in 2001.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words car, ownership, households, percentage, families, one, cars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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