The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
A glance at the line graph delineates statistics about the commensurability of consuming
energy
sources in the USA from 1980 to 2030.
Overall
, as it virtually accounts for the main source of
energy
consumption, petrol and oil will retain staggeringly their gap with respect to the other energies.
Furthermore
, it can explicitly be perceived that not only the three staple categories of
energy
were used in America but
also
the government is going to raise them, except for natural gas and hydropower, in the future. Looking into more details for the dominant
energy
source, commencing from 35
quadrillion
in 1980 to 40
quadrillion
in 2020, petroleum products
then
are supposed to increase dramatically to 50
quadrillion
in the year 2030. With regards to moderate consumption, 20
quadrillion
and approximately 16
quadrillion
were allocated to natural gas and coal, respectively, in 1980. After some fluctuations, both reached almost the same level, somewhere in the vicinity of 25
quadrillion
in 2020. Over the next decade, the amount of coal (30
quadrillion
) will be higher than that of natural gas, which still level off. Turning to the lowest class
energy
sources,
however
, nuclear was consumed the same as much as the figures for both solar/wind and hydropower energies in 1980, at nearly four
quadrillion
.
While
the consumption of hydropower in 2030 is going to remain equal to the beginning of the period, nuclear and solar/wind will provide more
energy
, about six
quadrillion
and five
quadrillion
in order
at the end
of the period.
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  • energy consumption
  • projections
  • renewable energy
  • non-renewable resources
  • sustainable
  • fossil fuels
  • nuclear energy
  • biofuels
  • hydroelectric power
  • solar energy
  • wind energy
  • trends
  • increases/decreases
  • shifts
  • milestones
  • significant
  • forecast
  • implications
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