The chart and graph below give information about three categories of workers in Australia and the unemployment levels within those groups.
The pie chart shows the percentage of
people
sorted by place of birth from the Use synonyms
workforce
in Use synonyms
Australia
in 2003 Use synonyms
while
the line graph depicts the percentage of unemployed Linking Words
people
by place of birth in Use synonyms
Australia
from 1993 to 2003.
Use synonyms
Overall
, It can be seen that the majority of the Linking Words
workforce
were Australians. It can Use synonyms
also
be confirmed that the unemployment rate of all three groups declined over the decade.
Beginning with the Linking Words
workforce
in 2003, Use synonyms
people
who were born in Use synonyms
Australia
took up to three-quarters of the Use synonyms
workforce
Use synonyms
while
workers who were born in non-English-speaking countries (N.Linking Words
E
.S.Use synonyms
C
.) took up to 14 per Use synonyms
cent
and the remaining ten per Use synonyms
cent
were residents of English-speaking countries (Use synonyms
E
.S.Use synonyms
C
.)
Turning to the remaining line graph, since 1993, the unemployment rate of the N.Use synonyms
E
.S.Use synonyms
C
. group had a considerable fall from nearly seven per Use synonyms
cent
to slightly three over half the period and Use synonyms
then
fluctuated from there until the end. Meanwhile, two groups of Linking Words
people
who were born in Use synonyms
Australia
and Use synonyms
E
.S.Use synonyms
C
. slightly declined from approximately four per Use synonyms
cent
to about two per Use synonyms
cent
after ten years passed.Use synonyms
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