The line chart below shows the annual fish consumption per capita in various regions from 1980 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below shows the annual fish consumption per capita in various regions from 1980 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the consumption of four different kinds of
meat
between 1979 and 2004 in European countries. As can be seen, people mostly used beef
meat
in 1979, which had a sudden decrease to under 200a little after 1979.
However
, it recovered and reached a peak near 1984. From 1984 to 1979,
although
there was a time when the consumption of
beaf
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beer
remained constant, it dropped significantly. After
that
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that,
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it had a decline erratic movements to around 100grams in 2004. Lamb and chicken
meat
were nearly around 150 grams in 1979. Despite the lamb which had a notable reduction, the use of chicken
meat
rose significantly to over 250 in 2004. The fish
meat
was slightly over 50 grams in 1979, which fluctuated with a slight decline to just under 50 in 2004.
Overall
,
while
the utilization of lamb, beef and fish declined rapidly over 25 years, the majority of people who used chicken
meat
increased considerably.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words meat with synonyms.
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