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The table below shows independent film releases by genre in the UK and Republic of Ireland in 2012.

The table below shows independent film releases by genre in the UK and Republic of Ireland in 2012.
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The table provides information about the
film
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 releases independently
according to
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genre
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 in the UK in 2012.
Overall
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, what stands
from
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out the majority of tickets
of
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comedy
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film
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films
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 was sold, the
comedy
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, documentary and drama
genre
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 films were
most
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 common. Looking at the details, the number of
the
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comedy
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, drama and documentary films ranked
first,
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which accounted for 26,35 and 35 respectively,
while
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 the least movie type was
biopic
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, for 0,7%. The figure
of
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 horror and thriller movies were released, the former and the latter being responsible for approximately the same level 9.5% and 8.8%
in
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turn. The remaining
genre
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 films, crime, action, romance and other
film
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 types
were
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contributed to less than 10 releases from
total
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a total
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148
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of 148
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. With regard to income, the
comedy
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genre
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 was earned, which accounted for approximately just under a fifth of the percentage, and the second
popular
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 movie was horror, at 20.2%. The rate of the biopic and
the
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drama
film
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 types
were
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 just under a tenth,
while
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 the
remining
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remaining
genres,
such
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 as crime, action, documentary, thriller and
other
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others
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 were allocated to less than 5%.
However
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, just 0.8% of
total
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the total
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 amount formed romance.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words film, genre, comedy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • The table illustrates
  • data on
  • independent film releases
  • by genre
  • in the UK and Republic of Ireland
  • highest number of releases
  • most popular genre
  • second most popular
  • significant number of releases
  • relatively fewer releases
  • lowest number of releases
  • overall
  • common genres
  • substantial presence
  • moderate number of releases
  • least number of releases
  • provides insights into
  • distribution of
  • across different genres
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