The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of generating electricity through
Use synonyms
water
power station. Add an article
a water
Overall
, the process requires day and night work to produce electricity.
First of all, the cycle begins with Linking Words
water
from the river going through an opened dam, which is accessible only during the day, Use synonyms
then
flowing down to a power station. Linking Words
Following
Linking Words
this
, Linking Words
liquid
reaches reversible tubes, Add an article
the liquid
that
Linking Words
is operates
the generator by creating energy and sending it up to power lines, Change the verb form
operates
that
are compounded to Correct pronoun usage
which
generator
. Meanwhile, the low-level reservoir is filling with Add an article
the generator
a generator
water
Use synonyms
also
via reversible turbines.
Linking Words
Secondly
, during the night, Linking Words
water
is pumped into Use synonyms
high-level
reservoir to Correct article usage
a high-level
fulfill
the Verb problem
fill
in day
place. The substance goes from low-level through the reversible turbines to reach a dam and the process commences again.Add a hyphen
in-day
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