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The table below gives information on customer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on customer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates data about customer expenditure in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey in different categories in the year 2002.
Overall
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, Turkey had the highest customer spending on
food
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, refreshments, smoking, leisure, and education items.
On the other hand
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, Itlay had the highest figures of spending on clothing and footwear.
However
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, Sweden recorded the lowest rate of people's spending on
food
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,
drink
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, cigarette, and clothing,
whereas
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, Spain had the lowest rate of spending on leisure and learning.
Customers
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 in Turkey spend more money on buying
food
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,
drink
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, and tobacco at 32.14%, and 4.35% spending on leisure and education. Ireland comes in second place with
customers
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 spending on foodstuff and
drink
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 at 28.91% ,
whereas
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 Italian
customers
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 spend most of their money on clothing and footwear at 9%. People in Sweden tend to spend less money on
food
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,
drink
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, smoking, and clothing at 15.77 and, 5.40, respectively.
However
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, Spain
customers
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 care less about spending on relaxation and education at a rate of 1.98%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, whereas".
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, drink, customers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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