The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned 

future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and 

make comparisons where relevant
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The maps show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and the planned future development to boost the population in that area.
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all of the factories will be replaced with housing. The factories turned housing on the west of the roundabout will be relocated so that two additional roads will be paved, making space for shops and a medical centre. One of these roads will head north across the river, bridging the town to a new large apartment complex in the farmland. The t-junction in the south will be changed into a roundabout to account for the increase in traffic. The factory
at the end
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of the road pointing east will be replaced with a school and a playground will be built nearby for the schoolchildren.
Overall
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, the town intends to incorporate services and build additional infrastructure to transform
this
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industrial area into a residential zone.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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