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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summsrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summsrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The table chart illustrates details about
sales
 of fairtrade-labelled coffee and
bananas
 in the
UK
,
Switzerland
,
Denemark
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Denmark
,Belgium and Sweden between 1999 to 2004
Overall
, for coffee, the
UK
 had the largest
sales
 in 2004,
on the other hand
,
bananas
 in
Switzerland
 had the largest
sales
 in 2004.
To begin
 with, as the table
presents
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shows
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,
UK
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the UK
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 had the most dramatic jump in
sales
for
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of
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 caffeine in 2004 by 20
milions
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million
of
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euros followed by
Switzerland
. Meanwhile, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden had a slight increase from 1999 to 2004. Looking at
bananas
, looks like people
preffered
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preferred
bananas
 in
Switzerland
.
In addition
 to that,
UK
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the UK
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 was the second top
transactions
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transaction
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 in 2004
by
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with
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milion
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million
 euros. Belgium had lower
sales
.
Moreover
, Sweden and Denmark showed
a
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better
sales
for
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of
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bananas
 in 1999 than they did in 2004.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, bananas, uk, switzerland with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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