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You have arranged a weekend holiday with a group of friends, but due to your studies you will now be unable to go with them. Write to your friends: -Tell them why you are unable to go. -Say sorry for this. -Suggest an alternative activity at another time.

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Hey everyone, I'
m
 so bummed to say
this
, but I'
m
 going to have to miss the weekend trip.  I know, I know, awful timing! Unfortunately, I've got a huge deadline looming for my studies that I can't get out of. I've been trying to juggle everything, but it's just too much right now. I'
m
 so, so sorry to miss out on the fun with you all. I was really looking forward to it! How about we try to get together for something else soon? Maybe a hike, a picnic, or even just a movie night?  I'
m
 free most weekends after 5
september
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September
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. Let me know what you think! Talk soon, Og'abek
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Be sure to include a date in your letter to make it clear when you informed them about your change in plans.
coherence cohesion
To make the structure even more clear, consider using short paragraphs or bullet points for your suggestions on alternative activities.
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The tone is very friendly and suitable for writing to friends, which enhances the overall effectiveness of the letter.
coherence cohesion
The letter opens and closes naturally, making it pleasant and engaging to read.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed with study commitments
  • important exams
  • require my full attention
  • miss out
  • looking forward to
  • plan a fun day out
  • short trip
  • hiking
  • theme park
  • relaxing weekend
  • nearby resort
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