The chart and table show working hour and salary for 4 different occupationa. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the occupations that are at their peak in hours and high earnings.
The general overview here is that, over the period, there was a significant increase in the jobs by nurses,
while
, in fire service, there were essential increases in earnings.
According to
the data, in the employment between of job important increase of hour and payment, fire service, there was has payment a peak at 48,700 per year, However
, Nures had booster work at 55 hours per week.
Furthermore
, police services and teachers had different data, it was important to police note that the number of payments at 52,050, moreover
, teachers had hours worked at 55 per weekly
.Replace the word
week
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