The chart and table show working hour and salary for 4 different occupationa. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart and table show working hour and salary for 4 different occupationa. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparison where relevant.
The line chart and the table
illustrates
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the
hours
worked for each week and
the
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apply
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their annual salaries for the following occupations: ( Fire
services
,
Police
services
,
Nurses
and
Teachers
).
Overall
, The Line graph shows that
Nurses
had worked the longest
hours
comparing
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to the other occupations. Meanwhile, the
Police
services
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service
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had the highest salary.
To begin
with,
according to
the line
graph
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graph,
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it is clear that
Nurses
and
Fire
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the Fire
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department worked for too many
hours
between roughly 40 to 55
hours
per week.
While
Police
Services
worked a bit less than 35
hours
respectively.
Teachers
worked the least amount of
hours
comparing
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compared
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to the other jobs. Looking at the table as
it
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apply
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shown,
Police
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the Police
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department had the highest annual salary with
the
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an
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amount of 52,050
pounds
. followed by the fire
services
with
the
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a
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salary of 48,700
pounds
. In
compariosn
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comparison
to the other
jobs
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jobs,
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we can see that
Nurses
and
teachers
had the lowest salaries
above all
with
the
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amount of 37,450
pounds
for
nurses
and 33,600
pounds
for
teachers
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, services, police, nurses, teachers, pounds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Occupations
  • Salaries
  • Working hours
  • Average
  • Annual
  • Comparison
  • Discrepancies
  • Professions
  • Doctors
  • Teachers
  • Engineers
  • Retail workers
  • Balanced
  • High-paying
  • Low-paying
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