The chart and table show working hour and salary for 4 different occupationa. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparison where relevant.
The line chart and the table
illustrates
the Correct subject-verb agreement
illustrate
hours
worked for each week and Use synonyms
the
their annual salaries for the following occupations: ( Fire Remove the article
apply
services
, Use synonyms
Police
Use synonyms
services
, Use synonyms
Nurses
and Use synonyms
Teachers
).
Use synonyms
Overall
, The Line graph shows that Linking Words
Nurses
had worked the longest Use synonyms
hours
Use synonyms
comparing
to the other occupations. Meanwhile, the Change the form of the verb
compared
Police
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
services
had the highest salary.
Fix the agreement mistake
service
To begin
with, Linking Words
according to
the line Linking Words
graph
Add a comma
graph,
it is clear that
Linking Words
Nurses
and Use synonyms
Fire
department worked for too many Correct article usage
the Fire
hours
between roughly 40 to 55 Use synonyms
hours
per week. Use synonyms
While
Linking Words
Police
Use synonyms
Services
worked a bit less than 35 Use synonyms
hours
respectively. Use synonyms
Teachers
worked the least amount of Use synonyms
hours
Use synonyms
comparing
to the other jobs.
Looking at the table as Wrong verb form
compared
it
shown, Correct pronoun usage
apply
Use synonyms
Police
department had the highest annual salary with Add an article
the Police
the
amount of 52,050 Correct article usage
an
pounds
. followed by the fire Use synonyms
services
with Use synonyms
the
salary of 48,700 Correct article usage
a
pounds
. In Use synonyms
compariosn
to the other Correct your spelling
comparison
jobs
we can see that Add a comma
jobs,
Nurses
and Use synonyms
teachers
had the lowest salaries Use synonyms
above all
with Linking Words
the
amount of 37,450 Correct article usage
apply
pounds
for Use synonyms
nurses
and 33,600 Use synonyms
pounds
for Use synonyms
teachers
.Use synonyms
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, services, police, nurses, teachers, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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