The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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This
figure depicts the average amount of consumption on
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of
beverange
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beverage
beverages
entertaitnment
, clothing and housing Correct your spelling
entertainment
by
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in
UK
, Germany, Turkey and Spain. It is clear from the table, Correct article usage
the UK
the
highest percentage is 37 and it was consumed in Correct word choice
that the
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the UK
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the UK
living
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According
UK
housing is the highest income consumed among the five countries. However
, the other aspects such
as the
clothing and Correct article usage
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entertaitnment
are between the average, which they are 11%.
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entertainment
While
Germeny
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Germany
spending
19% on Wrong verb form
spent
entertaining
, which is the highest Replace the word
entertainment
propotion
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proportion
Additionally
, in clothing
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the clothing
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colour
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it spent 15%. We can see from the illustration, Add a comma
coloum,
the
food and drinks Correct word choice
that the
is
22% and the housing is 33% which is similar to Change the verb form
are
France
consumption.
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France's
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, both UK
and Correct article usage
the UK
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spent Correct your spelling
Germany
high income
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high-income
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proportion
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on the other aspects.Correct word choice
than
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