The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the year 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK. And the pie-chart shows reasons for migration in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the year 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK. And the pie-chart shows reasons for migration in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The following line charts illustrate the duration of
immigrants
residing in the
UK
from 2000 until 2008
along with
the reasons
of
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their movement in 2008.
Overall
, most of the
immigrants
had stayed up to 2
years
only in the
UK
for the given period. In 2008, the
immigrants
that
come
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came
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to the
UK
was
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were
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dominated by
worker
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workers
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. In detail, the length of stay of people who intend to migrate to the
UK
was divided
in
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into
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3 categories, which were 4 or more
years
, up to 2
years
, and 2 to 4
years
. It can be seen that in 2000 and 2001, the number of
immigrants
who intended to stay either 4 or more
years
and up to 2
years
were
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was
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the same, by 150
thousands
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thousand
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.
Meawhile
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Meanwhile
, the category of 4 or more
years
surpassed all of its opponents for the rest of the
years
and eventually
reach
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reached
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250
thousands
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thousand
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by 2008.
Moreover
, not many people like to live for 2 to 4
years
in the
UK
, it was just around 15
thousands
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thousand
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.
In addition
, the major reason
of
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people moved to the
UK
in 2008 was to work, which accounted for 36% of the total
immigrants
, followed by study, recorded at 32%. It was only 16% of the
immigrants
who decide to accompany their family members.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words immigrants, uk, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • immigrate
  • emigrate
  • migration
  • immigrant
  • intended length of stay
  • short-term stay
  • long-term stay
  • trends
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • primary reasons
  • comparative analysis
  • contributing factors
  • data interpretation
  • work-related migration
  • study-related migration
  • family reunification
  • asylum seeking
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