The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the amount of
milk
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produced in the
Netherlands
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,
Australia
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,
Tanzania
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, and
Guatemala
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in the years of 1990, 2000 and 2010.
Overall
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it is clear that
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the
Netherlands
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had the highest number of
production
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in all three years,
while
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Guatemala
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had the lowest numbers.
According to
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the data, the
Netherlands
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produced the highest amount of
milk
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, in 1990, with 11,262,000
litres
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, followed by
Australia
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which produced 11,246,000
litres
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.
On the other hand
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,
Tanzania
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's
production
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of
milk
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was more than
Guatemala
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's by 60,000
litres
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. After ten years, the the
Netherlands
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and
Australia
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had dropped their
production
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to 11,155,000 and 11,105,000 respectively.
In contrast
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,
Tanzania
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increases
milk
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production
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to 1,42,000
litres
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, and
Guatemala
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to 55,000
litres
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. In 2010, there was a slight growth in
milk
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production
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in the
Netherlands
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by almost 300
litres
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;
however
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,
Australia
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experienced a decline in the
production
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of 9,165,000
litres
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.
Furthermore
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, a slight increase in
Tanzania
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production
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was in 2010 by 13,000
litres
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.
Whereas
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,
Guatemala
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rose the
production
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of
milk
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to 84,000
litres
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, netherlands, australia, tanzania, guatemala, production, litres with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual production
  • country comparison
  • decade analysis
  • fluctuations
  • overall trends
  • increasing/decreasing trends
  • peak production
  • relatively higher/lower
  • production volume
  • significant growth/decrease
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