In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Write 250 words within no more than 40 minutes.

There is no doubt that reading becoming
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available
to
every one
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online nowadays. The sales of printed
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newspapers
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has
decreas
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decreased
decrease
,
as well as
they can read free from online.
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essay will discuss why reading online is far more effective than printed
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newspapers
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or books.
First,
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time
and
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of
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the one who
use
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it.
According to
the new technology, There
is
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many e-libraries which have huge numbers of books and resources.
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,
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when
where
ever you search for e-books online there are many sources
such
like
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open liberary free and so more
web sites
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websites
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which
offers
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reading .
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,
this
can improve
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life like
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students
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to save
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time
of
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searching
of
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books and
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materials
.
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the News
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is the most
imortant
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important
things
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that
person
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a person
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must be informed by
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apply
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these days. For the current
time
,
news
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affects
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on
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current circumstances as stocks and precious metals like gold.
As a result
, reading
news
online is making life easier,
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: the
news
can be shared
to
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with
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others by click so,
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its
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it is
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more effective than
news
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a
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paper
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newspaper
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.
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,
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news paper
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is effect badly on
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the
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online
news
is better than
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newspapers
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to decrease
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in decreasing
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cutting
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of trees. 
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discuss
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why
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the online
resouces
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resources
resource
of reading
is
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are
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better than printed resources. Online reading is more practical than others for many reasons
As
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,
save
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saves
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effort and
environment
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at
same
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time
. Many people need more information about online reading.
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grammar
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content development
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vocabulary usage
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content identification
The essay identifies clear reasons why online reading is considered advantageous over printed newspapers and books, such as time-saving and environmental benefits.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-books
  • digital media
  • tactile experience
  • screen fatigue
  • digital divide
  • sustainable living
  • niche market
  • accessibility
  • cost-effective
  • environmental concerns
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