You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the percentage of adults in urban and rural areas who took part in four free time activities in 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information and compare where relevant, by selecting and reporting the key features. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below shows the percentage of adults in urban and rural areas who took part in four free time activities in 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information and compare where relevant, by selecting and reporting the key features.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The table displays the
number
of young
people
in the countryside and city who spend their leisure
time
in four different types of activities between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
in the past, young
people
in urban and rural
areas
spent the majority of their
time
reading,
while
the least numbers were in
photography
activities. The same trend was
at the end
of the period.
According to
the data, in 1990, 61% of
adults
in cities spent their free
time
reading, in comparison with 21% of
adults
who played different kinds of sports.
However
, young
people
who prefer animated games and
photography
were 10% and 7% respectively.
On the other hand
, 71% of youth in rural
areas
tend to read in free
time
and the second most popular activity was playing at 26%. Animated play outraced
photography
by 4%. In 2010, the same trend was followed as 78% of
adults
in the city and countryside spent their leisure
time
reading, the
number
of
adults
who played animated in urban
areas
stayed the same at 10%,
whereas
the
number
of
adults
who practised
photography
experienced an increase to reach 14%, in 2010.
In contrast
, playing decreased by 8%, in urban
areas
.
Furthermore
, 14% of
adults
in rural
areas
spend most of their
time
playing animated and 24% doing
photography
.
However
, the
number
of young
people
who played different types of sport stayed the same at 26% from the past until 2010.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, time, areas, photography, adults with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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