The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided tables depict the international trade of 2 categories in 5 certain nations in Europe in 1999 and 2004, measured in millions of euros.
overall
, it can be observed that all 5 given nations witnessed an upswing in the
number
of
sales
of fair trade-labelled coffee and bananas, except for Belgium and Sweden, where
sales
of bananas experienced a drop.
Additionally
, the UK had consistently been on the most
sales
over the period. With regards to the coffee
sales
in the UK, starting at 1.5M, lower 2 times than Switzerland,
however
,
this
was seen a dramatic growth to literally 20M by the year 2004, outnumbering the other 4 areas.
Similarly
, in Switzerland, the budget rose from 3M in 1999 to 6M in 2004,
while
the three remaining countries saw an increase in
number
, the statistics of these nations recorded a slight shift to just below 2M in 2000, compared to the initial data In terms of banana
sales
, once again, the UK experienced a surge to 47M in 2004, just tripling its
sales
in 1999.
This
was followed by Switzerland and Denmark, where banana
sales
moderately rose from 1M and 0.6M in 1999 to 5.5M and 4M in 2004, respectively.
Nevertheless
, Belgium and Sweden saw a downward trend, commencing with roughly 2M in 1999,
this
number
dropped to approximately 1M
at the end
of the period.downward trend, commencing with roughly 2M in 1999,
this
number
dropped to approximately 1M
at the end
of the period.
Submitted by Nghỉ hè vui vẻ cả nhà on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, sales, m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • consumption patterns
  • sustainable agriculture
  • ethically sourced
  • market demand
  • statistical trends
  • sales figures
  • incremental growth
  • market share
  • consumer awareness
  • corporate responsibility
  • socially conscious consumerism
  • benchmarking
  • sales trajectory
  • quantitative comparison
What to do next:
Look at other essays: