The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
The line graph illustrates the percentage of Australian
exports
to Japan, the Unites
States, China, and India between 1990 and 2012.
Correct your spelling
United
Overall
, it is evident that the final percentage of exports
to China and India increase
and to Japan and the USA Wrong verb form
increased
decrease
in 2012 compared to 1990.
Wrong verb form
decreased
According to
the data, it is clear that
exports
to China had a dramatic rose
between 2008 and 2012. Even though the smallest Replace the word
rise
exports
going
to Wrong verb form
went
this
country in 1990, became the largest exports
going country
in 2012, which accounted Correct article usage
the country
to
Change preposition
for
eight
Correct determiner usage
an
times
gap.
Looking at the data in detail, Correct your spelling
eight-times
exports
to US
decreased over the period, which was recorded from 11% in 1990 to 16% in 2012, approximately. Correct article usage
the US
Lastly
, exports
to the US decrease
than India’s Wrong verb form
decreased
exports
in 2012.Submitted by kopopig on
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