The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Contained in two illustrations is information pertaining to the wage comparison between 5 distinct careers in the United Kingdom and the approximate

hours

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at work

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these fields. From an observational perspective, it can be seen that every job's salary increased after three years at work with the exception of police.

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teacher

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teachers

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and

firefighter

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experienced the longest working duration

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it is subway

operator

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that

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witnessed the shortest working period. Regarding the bar chart,

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the underground

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driver is the most profitable profession with 50000

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for starting income and a rose by a

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thousand

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in the next 3 years. Following up was firefighter and teacher with an increase from 40000

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and 33000

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to 42000

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and 35000

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respectively.

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nurse

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saw a slight rise from around 17000

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to exactly 20000

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, law enforcer's

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remained intact throughout the 3-year period. Turning to the table, the same working

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per week can be

obserbed

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observed

teacher

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teachers

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and

firefighter

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firefighters

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with 55

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long. Police duty

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last

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for 40

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weekly which is 2

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longer than that of

nurse

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a nurse

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, underground driver has the

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working

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, at 36

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per week.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, pounds with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

197 words

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The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.

In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

In many countries around the world, obesity is increasing, especially among children. One solution is to increase the tax on food and drinks which contain large amounts of sugar. How effective is this solution? What other measures would be effective?