The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Contained in two illustrations is information pertaining to the wage comparison between 5 distinct careers in the United Kingdom and the approximate
hours
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at work
of
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these fields. From an observational perspective, it can be seen that every job's salary increased after three years at work with the exception of police.
Additionally
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,
teacher
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teachers
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and
firefighter
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firefighters
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experienced the longest working duration
while
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it is subway
operator
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operators
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that
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witnessed the shortest working period. Regarding the bar chart,
underground
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the underground
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driver is the most profitable profession with 50000
pounds
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for starting income and a rose by a
thoundsand
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thousand
pounds
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in the next 3 years. Following up was firefighter and teacher with an increase from 40000
pounds
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and 33000
pounds
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to 42000
pounds
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and 35000
pounds
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respectively.
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,
nurse
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nurses
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saw a slight rise from around 17000
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to exactly 20000
pounds
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.
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, law enforcer's
earning
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earnings
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remained intact throughout the 3-year period. Turning to the table, the same working
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per week can be
obserbed
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observed
in
teacher
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teachers
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and
firefighter
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firefighters
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with 55
hours
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long. Police duty
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last
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for 40
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weekly which is 2
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longer than that of
nurse
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a nurse
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.
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, underground driver has the
least
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lowest
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working
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, at 36
hours
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per week.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, pounds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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