The line graph provides information about the number of the use of products in covert industry, namely, timber, paper and pulp in Europen country between 1980 nad 2000
The line graph provides information about the number of the use of products in covert industry, namely, timber, paper and commodity in Europen country and the trend of timber showed the highest rate in 1985 than other products
pulp
in Europen country
between 1980 Fix the agreement mistake
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and
nad
2000
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and
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, that of production ofAdd an article
the
while
the level of pulp
experienced the biggest figure than paper and the result of published falling trends in 1985
According to
the graph, that of pulp
started from at 6 million
tonnes
in 1980. And this
result increased significantly and reached to
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mln
tonnes
in 1985. And there was a gradual increase of tonnes
in pulp
to 8 million
tonnes
in 1990. And this
level increase rise until 2000 year and showed at 10 mln
.tonnes
. Previously the conclusion of timber at 5 mln
tonnes
in 1980. And this
grew sharply and published at 10 million
tonnes
in 1985. But, there was decreased considerably to 8 mln
tonnes
in 1990. Then
, this
conclusion a steady fell to 7,5 million
tonnes
in 2000. Initally
, the epitome of paper started from at 4 Correct your spelling
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