The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pictograms here illustrate the percentage
use
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of the three consumer electronics,
that are
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washing
machine
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machines
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,
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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and vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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in
household
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households
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,
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, the amount of time spent
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chores per week in 99
years
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year
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span, starting from 1920 to 2019. Housework included washing clothes, preparing
means
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meals
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and cleaning.
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, the
use
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of appliances followed
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an upward
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upward
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an upward
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trend universally
while
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the workhour went downward. In 1920, only 30% of houses had vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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, 40% had washing
machine
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machines
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and zero percent had
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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. All three
catagory
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categories
jumped to 50-60% by
next
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the next
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two decades.
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development continued till 1960. Following that era, the
use
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of washing
maching
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machine
became stable till 2019, hovering around 75%. But the
serge
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of
other
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the other
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two item’s
use
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continued and both reached 100%
use
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by 2000, that
maintined
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maintained
to
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the rest of the time.
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, in 1920 people used to spend 50% of their time doing housework. In the next four
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decades
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,
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number steadily dropped to 20%. From 1960, the rate of
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drop slowed down,
continued
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but continued
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nonetheless
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. By 2019,
this
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dipped to only 10% of total work
hour
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hours
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per week.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words use with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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