The graphs below show the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Contained in the given graphs is the information pertaining to the proportion of males and females 60-64 years old who were employed in four nations over 10-year periods
Overall
,it can be seen that all the figures for men decreased while
the figures for women followed this
trend were Belgium and Japan except for Australia and the USA.
Beginning with the rates of women aged 60-64 in employment,it can be noticed that Belgium declined from 8% to 7% whereas
Japan also
fell to 40% from 43%.In contrast
, the USA increased to 38% after it started at 36% and Australia climbed from just above a quarter to 18%.
Moving onto the percentage of men aged 60-64 in employment,it is obvious that Belgium accounted for over three quarters before it significantly reduced by 60%.Regarding the USA, it dropped to 55% from 73%.Next to Japan, it comprised 86% and plummeted to just under three quarters.Finally
,Australia included 76% and it was cut by 29%.Submitted by [email protected] on
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