The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. Describe the information presented below. Comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.
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comparison
between married women and married Add an article
a comparison
the comparison
men
in the average hours
of unpaid work each week.
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, it can be seen that's
the maximum unpaid work Unnecessary verb
that
hours
was done for married men
. Their
is a Replace the word
There
sagnificant deffirence
between males and females in all given categories.
The average Correct your spelling
significant difference
hours
that men
without any child works
without Change the verb form
work
paid
was 30 Replace the word
pay
hours
. Moreover
, it rose to just over 50 hours
if they had one or two kids . Men
with more than three children they
work 60 Correct pronoun usage
apply
houre
without money.
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hours
hour
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the other hand , we can Correct your spelling
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notic
from the chart that Correct your spelling
notice
their
is no huge Replace the word
there
differince
in Correct your spelling
difference
women
data .Change noun form
women's
In
addition
Add a comma
addition,
their
is Replace the word
there
aslight
decline in unpaid time Correct your spelling
a slight
slight
depenet
on the number of kids .Correct your spelling
dependent
depend
depends
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