The bar chart shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

The bar chart shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people including men, women and
children
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who ate five portions of
fruits
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and
vegetables
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every day in the UK between 2001 and 2008.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the percentage of consumption
fruits
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and
vegetables
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by women every day was higher than men and
children
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all of the time.
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, the figures for
children
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who ate
fruits
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and
vegetables
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did not change during the 3
years
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starting from 2001. Looking at the bar chart, the percentage of females who ate some natural food daily significantly increased by nearly 15% during 6
years
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starting at 20% in 2001 and reaching a peak at 35% in 2006 before slightly decreasing to 30% in the final year.
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, the proportion of men consuming
fruits
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and
vegetables
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remained stable at 18% from 2001 to 2003 before climbing to 27% in 2006 and slightly going down to 26% in 2008. As can be seen, the percentage of
children
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who ate
fruits
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and
vegetables
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in the UK did not change in the first 3
years
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with 11% and slightly went up to 17% during 2
years
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before growing up to nearly 23% in the final year.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words children, fruits, vegetables, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • portion
  • consumption
  • trend
  • significant increase/decrease
  • stability
  • public health campaign
  • awareness
  • socio-economic factors
  • health implications
  • daily intake
  • nutritional habits
  • dietary guidelines
  • public policy
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