The graphs below show the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Presented for consideration is a bar chart
illustrates
the fraction of Wrong verb form
illustrating
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
aged 60-64 who were engaged in Fix the agreement mistake
females
four
countries
from 1970 to 2000. Units are measured in percentage.
Overall
, it can be seen that the percentage of women aged 60-64 had an upward trend through the following age in four
countries
.
Looking at the figures in further
detail, it is evident that the ratio of men and women in Japan was the highest about 70% while
in Belgium was the lowest in four
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the four
countries
approximately 7%. Following the next age, all of the four
countries
increased by double the previous age. The rate of Japan and USA
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the USA
accounting
for 74% and 55% respectively.
Turning to the remaining data, during the period of 2000, the proportion of the aged 60-64 in Belgium was the lowest Wrong verb form
accounted
account
for 8% Replace the word
accounting
while
the lowest was ranked as Australia at about 16%. Next,
the rate of the four
countries
all increased significantly.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words four, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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