ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie chart shows average monthly student expenditure in the UK in 2016. The bar chart shows sources of student income in the same year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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A glance at the pie chart provided reveals how much
money
British students spent per month in
different categories of items, Change preposition
on
along with
their income sources in 2016.
Overall
, it is evident that student loan
, family and part-time Fix the agreement mistake
loans
job
were the major sources of student income, Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
which
the majority part of Correct pronoun usage
apply
those
was spent Correct pronoun usage
which
in
rent.
Change preposition
on
While
most students decided to moved
out from home when they Change the verb
move
attend
college, not surprisingly, half of their expenditure was used to pay for their rent. Second in terms of expenditure was food, the amount spent was only one-third of rental expense, at 124 Wrong verb form
attended
Euro dollars
. Correct your spelling
Eurodollars
Money
spent on socialising, travelling and bills had a moderate levels
between 52 Euro to 69 Euro.
With regard to the sources of Correct the article-noun agreement
a moderate level
moderate levels
money
, although
80% of undergraduates had student loans, the money
couldn't cover all of their expenses. As a result
, one in seven students needed to either get financial support from their family or find a part-time job. On the other hand
, the data provided reflected that less than half of undergraduates had previously had a saving habit. During the year in question
approximately 40% of pupils were qualified to get financial Add a comma
question,
aids
.Fix the agreement mistake
aid
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