The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.

The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.
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borrowed from June to September
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the proportion of distinct types of
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in 2014. In general, the most noticeable changes were the increase of three
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namely West Eaton, Church Mount and Sutton Wood with the exception of Rye Slip.
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, Fiction
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accounted for the majority of
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borrowed. Beginning with the line graph in June when there was the same data of West Eaton and Church Mount with 50
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borrowed. These were followed by a significant growth to 150
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. Meanwhile, Rye Slip dropped
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dramatically from 300
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to approximately 170
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. In terms of Sutton Wood, there was an increase from June to July before declining gradually to 100
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in August and it
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surged to 300
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that hold the lion's share. Moving onto the pie chart, it is apparent that the most popular type of
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was Fiction
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with 45%,
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there was just 19% for Biography
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.
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, Science and History
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had the same percentage with 14% and the most unpopular
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was
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Selfhelp
with 10%.
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